Two Paintings

[Benedikt]

Hi there.
Since I never received a single reply in the finally finished, I reckon I got to keep poking you with my stuff until someday I receive one^^

First work is heavily inspired by a german painter named Piloty;
http://poli.oppono.de/wallenstein/wa5.jpg
It's got some personal story behind the obvious.

Second is sort of a portrait and called "Daydream";
http://poli.oppono.de/tagtraum.jpg

Well. I hope it's not too bad for this section of ca.org. A comment or two would make a nice christmas present and be much appreciated ;)
Ben

[Orifice]

Hey there Ben, and merry christmas to ya!:)
I like 'em they're nice n warm, n I do like the colors you have chosen! Very nice expression and mood in the second one.
Seems like you have got anatomy pretty much under controll, shadowin is by me the thing
you could improve the most upon. More distinct shadowin and casted shadows is extremely
important for lifelikedness... The guys arm on ye first one casts a shadow, which looks great,
though its not consistant throughout the painting.
Key sorry for all the crittin mate, overall I like 'em alot! Good work.:D

[lennon]

You want it and you have it!
Good job. Keep going.