Portfolio Works

[Justin W]

I'd like a very honest evaluation of some portfolio pieces and my overall current hire-ability for the games industry. My entire portfolio is located at http://www.justinwaltersart.com Any feedback is appreciated, thanks!

http://www.justinwaltersart.com/big/dp-01.jpg

http://www.justinwaltersart.com/big/dp-04.jpg

http://www.justinwaltersart.com/big/dp-02.jpg

http://www.justinwaltersart.com/big/dp-12.jpg

[thebeetle]

The second illustration is very cool, good color and composition! Man face is very interested, very strong and expressive! I like!
The others are less personnal

[ramonsk8]

I liek the first one, I like the second one, I also like the third one, and I like the IDEA of the fourth one. good job, but in your last drawing it looks like the man with the gun is aiming at the ground... strange

[Rich Pellegrino]

The second is really good. I am not too sure about the last. It looks to me that the figures are not grounded enough. They all seem to be floating. I think it is the shadows that are causing the problem. keep it up your doing good.

[Elwell]

The perspective and relationships of the figures to the environment in the last one are way off. This is something you're really going to need to tackle.

[Azza]

I would suggest for the perspective dimensional problem the read of this two pages of Figure Drawing by Loomis, it helped me ;)

http://fineart.sk/show.php?w=904
http://fineart.sk/show.php?w=917

by the way, I like the strong contrast on the second one :)

[Justin W]

Thanks for all the feedback so far, I appreciate it. I agree with the crits on the last piece, the floating figures need to be corrected. Thanks for posting the Loomis links, Azza!

[Dile_]

Nice stuff, but to be very hounest, the first one is very flat,
The second one isnt really a portfolio piece, and 3 and 4 is lacking fundamentals..
However, just keep it up! You've got some nice advice already!


~Dile