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[corbeau]

Hi ! Some images for a comic's project. I try to find a good and fast style to gain in time. Comments. Thanks.

http://img206.echo.cx/img206/1624/essaiasiat2rb.jpg

http://img242.echo.cx/img242/1246/batfo4on.jpg

http://img150.echo.cx/img150/990/decorsa3fw.jpg

http://img150.echo.cx/img150/3332/persofo4ua.jpg

http://img106.echo.cx/img106/4461/decfo8mc.jpg

[Mort]

i like it

[Snotboebel]

VERY nice colors ! Love the first pic, just awesome :confident

Greetz,

Snot

[csteingart]

Those are great, I love all of those.

Good line weight, and colours.

Look forward to some sequentials.

c

[vcoleman]

Hey, I really dig your use of color. its gutsy and you pull it off well. I do think you should push you line quality a touch in the foreground. nice work.

[-Max Bertolini-]

Nice work, I only would work abit more on the man sitting on the car, seems to much a sketch compared to the car (that has a photographic reference obviously, while the man doesn't)

- Max

[Wunderknabe]

Wow, very nice.
The colors and athmosphere are just perfect.

No negative critics.

[cannibalcandy]

I like them, but they have a very strong warm Fifth Element feel to them. This is not a bad thing, I just felt it ought to be pointed out... IN particular the floating junkh feels just like the vendor from the film. And the street scenes have a similar cinematic affliction. Good work, keep trying. Grandfaddah say, it can't rain ever-ee day.

[Ragnar X]

these are nice!

[stefans]

Gorgeous work...

....great style....great characters (I checked that other thread with all the characters as well...WOW!).....beautiful atmosphere.....

[Arctis]

I really like the first one. the others are nice too, but there's a lack of contrast compared to the first : why not try to strengthen black and light sources ?
On the last, there are perspective problems on the 2 grey buildings' roofs on the right.
Good luck.

[corbeau]

Thank you for comments !


I like them, but they have a very strong warm Fifth Element feel to them. This is not a bad thing, I just felt it ought to be pointed out... IN particular the floating junkh feels just like the vendor from the film. And the street scenes have a similar cinematic affliction. Good work, keep trying. Grandfaddah say, it can't rain ever-ee day.

There are some similar points , that's true for the boat.

I try to post more in the week , see you ! :rendered:

[Kappei]

hey

looks cool,
the color style looks a bit bengal-istic :)
really cool

cya
kap

[ktk]

indeed very nice colors. I like it

[twisteums]

good work, friend.
i don't find it "bengalistic" at all, it's 100% "crow style"

:ap: :ae: :al: :ao:
:ar: :ai: :ap: :ar: :ai: :az: :ao: :an: :at:

[Ive]

i will repeat: great colors! and would say: add more reflections on the water, and the rainy street, this looks like some other media not water...

[corbeau]

hey

looks cool,
the color style looks a bit bengal-istic :)
really cool

cya
kap

Ho thank you !

Ive> yes I think you'r true , but the time for a comic is limited. This is not an illustration. So I tried to work faster as I can.

ktk> thanks

[Gregory Wohlwend]

the first one has such a great 3D effect that it stands out amongst the rest. I think that is also why you posted it first. You should try to do the same thing with the airship as well, while the top may be more for wallpaper use, it's still a level of work that the rest are not at...

[corbeau]

The problem is that the first one take me to much time . Thank you ! :rendered:

[corbeau]

Hello ! Some anothere works for my comic project ;

http://img214.echo.cx/img214/2838/planchefo3qt.jpg

http://img214.echo.cx/img214/4817/detailtete8tm.jpg

http://img214.echo.cx/img214/534/detailpelo7rc.jpg

http://img93.echo.cx/img93/9629/gareforum0ff.jpg

see you

[Red_Rook]

wow very nice, i love your colour and texture use :D

[spudstudios]

great stuff. No crits.

[Danilo]

Colours are great, but line could be softer ant suggest the depth.
EDIt: Hey, I remmeber now you M&S entry. It was talked about empty space. Why you not try to use it in a comic?

[DStevens]

comic-wise I think that you've got a really nice combination of unique line art and coloring style. Your coloring especially is a really good blend between soft blends and hard cuts that I'd really like to get to myself. You were right to show the close up of that first panel because it's really good. I'm not terribly crazy about all the lense flares going on but I guess they make sense with the rainy scene.

[se7en_]

Thsi is all very diesel - love the style and colors.

[N8 Van Dyke]

Great car. It has a lot of charm and personality to it. Also, nice blues in the train shot!

[CaptainInsano]

Can't say anything that has already been mentioned, but this is simply AWESOME work! I particularly like the rainy streets. I'm in love with those.

[Jaycee]

Beautiful drawing style and colors :^^:

[corbeau]

Just another design , for fun...see you

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/3894/dresseurfo5pa.jpg

[NYXX]

amazing stuff how many pages does this comic have. do u have a publisher?

[duddlebug]

These are superb. I love 'em.

The colours, characters and atmosphere you've created are wonderful.

I'll echo a couple of other people. Is this being published? I'm off to check the website now, so maybe i'll find an answer there...

I'd love to see more...

EDIT: Just checked out your website... lovely design and great work. I don't normally like music on a site but your music gave a very gallic feel and seemed to suit the 'magical' quality of the imagery. I also loved your dog sketches. Fantastic!!

[twisteums]

wow, the last one! awesome pic dude!
you were right to abandon the line, the picture wins in depth!
we want more! :)

[corbeau]

Hello guys, just some other design concept ;

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/9420/redshangaifo7de.jpg

http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/9131/shangaicity25gs.jpg

http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/1332/guerrier1hy.jpg

http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/6208/gamin9rg.jpg

http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/1866/policeman1pb.jpg

http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/9791/tueur1il.jpg

http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/6540/veilleur5qc.jpg

http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/9497/loup8xn.jpg

http://www.plumedecorbeau.com/images/jade.jpg

http://www.plumedecorbeau.com/images/maskaclown.jpg

http://img422.imageshack.us/img422/4043/pandaperso5aa.jpg

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/2378/littleriversite21ko.jpg

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/4305/littleriversite0ho.jpg

[Mirana]

These are a lot of fun. I like the newest environment in particular. :)

[Alday.J]

Het, man ! Nice stuff here. I like the "red shangaii" and the one with a panda the most. Bonne chance pour le projet, il y a de la qualité dans ton travail.
Cheers, dude !
J.

[Simon Boxer]

Absolutely amazing. Very effective use of textures and love the colours.

[Artguy]

Awsome work. You're one of the 3 artists on this board whose work I have bookmarked. I love the way you use color, and at times tried to immitate your color style... but not really successfully.

Love the new posts. Let us know when and where we can get the comic!