Underwater Search

[Needlelhead Puppet]

Crits and comments are welcome and needed...just a newbie :bashful: http://www.anduin.de/gallery/albums/felix/UBOOTWRACK2.sized.jpg

[thebluepuppy]

what are you trying to show in the painting? the big black foreground element is killing it. show some for in it and touch up the silhoueete. the scale is kind of off. maybe add another submarine near the cave entrance to show scale. since its blue maybe make the lights orange to show some contrast from that blue and to draw the viewers eye towards the center of the painting. good work though! some of that is opinion so take with salt grains. :wink:

[squirpy]

the blue is too saturated and pure. If you look at underwater pics, the blue is more blue-green and a lot less saturated.

Outlines should become less dark as they fade into the distance.

[Needlelhead Puppet]

Boa... okay,ìf I might have some time I try to do a new version of the same motive...but thanks for crits...i would help me to get less mistakes.