View Full Version : Good Morning *warning nudity*
SeanE
November 9th, 2004, 08:11 AM
http://sean.sevspace.com/photoshop/goodmorning.jpg
Just knocked this one up quickly as a practise piece for my new wacom. Ended up using the mouse again mostly ..I'm so weak willed.... :cry:
see the uncensored version here
http://sean.sevspace.com/photoshop/goodmorning2.jpg
cheers
Sean
Ilja Murometz
November 9th, 2004, 08:34 AM
Hey, how do you know how my girlfriend looks ????? >:{ >:{
Looks pretty good, like the colours, what wacom do you use?
behemot5
November 9th, 2004, 09:22 AM
:perv: :perv: :perv:
Dave Sheppard
November 9th, 2004, 09:54 AM
You ah.... "Knocked this one up..." :P Interesting choice of words. D
Fozzybar
November 10th, 2004, 03:58 AM
The coloring looks nice...but the linework quality is annoying...the outlines really lower the quality of your work...they are too thick and not anti-aliased which hurts in the eyes...
Great coloring + bad lines = mediocre
Tom Nguyen
November 10th, 2004, 06:27 AM
The coloring looks nice...but the linework quality is annoying...the outlines really lower the quality of your work...they are too thick and not anti-aliased which hurts in the eyes...
Great coloring + bad lines = mediocre
I kind of disagree respectfully. This illustration is intended in the comic book style, and lines do tend to be hard-edged if they are inked...the boldness is just a preference/style, and to each his own. He also did mention that he knocked this out pretty quickly, and that he used a mouse for most of it.
All a matter of taste is all.
Best,
TOM
thirdeye
November 10th, 2004, 07:16 AM
I agree with Fozzybear that the outlines are too thick especially on her face -it makes the whole piece look very "heavy". But what really hurts MY eyes is the top of her head - the hair don't look too good - i know it's supposed to be comic style and stuff but they're completly messed up and you can only tell that this is hair because they're on her head - you should work some more on them. Apart from that - they're in the wrong place. Looks kinda like her skull is chopped off a bit :)
The other hairdo on the other hand looks terrific :perv: Whole pice is quite nice :)
Murlodont
November 10th, 2004, 07:21 AM
I agree, too outlined--I noticed something else too; on the uncensored version the pubic hair extends above the bikini tan-line (not good for the beach).
Woodrodius
November 10th, 2004, 02:04 PM
Just knocked this one up quickly
haha
Anyways, I like the gesture here, but she's so cartoony it seems like she would look better with a more severe, clean color job. Looks pretty good though.
Boris
November 11th, 2004, 01:11 AM
hm, the coloring between her nose and eyebrows bugs me. i think it should be more smoothe. and the her "kitty" is weird looking, but acceptable. otherwise, i like it.
Isamov
November 11th, 2004, 01:20 AM
I really like the airbrushed look of her tan. Specially the tan lines. Nice touch!