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FERDAX
November 25th, 2012, 01:49 PM
I designed a creature for a pc game (third person shooter) which is a creature that has no mouth but however possesses a huge hostility against its surroundings. It has two arms that connect to a small rotative joint (360) that contains two elbows with two arms, so that means it can hold a weapon on one arm and reload it with the same arm in the other arm, sounds complicated but below is a sketch and a MSpaint drawing.

Description, its skin is like the skin of a soft baby but is more muscular and it's joints have a "foreskin" that prevent dust and dirt from getting in between the open skin joints that allow unlimited 360 spins. its torso however can tilt by sliding on the U shaped flesh-joint.

It's born as a foamy substance attached to a random school toilet pipe, when girls throw bloody tampongs it is provided protein and when boys wank off or flush down used condoms the creature "consumes" it and i grows inside the pipe until it bursts and it begins hunting down it's prey, high-school students. :D


here are my sketches:
http://i48.tinypic.com/25rm2o5.jpg
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This is the paint version (excuse me, the uploader tool size limit did not allow me to upload the original size)
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FERDAX
November 25th, 2012, 02:02 PM
http://fuskbugg.se/dl/NSVvx5/IMG_0001.bmp
One of the pictures with darker lines.

Nast
January 27th, 2013, 12:26 PM
None of these designs actually read. try spending more time actually drawing. And make the drawing describe itself, if you have to write a paragraph describing it then the drawing just isn't good enough.