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Tyrack
September 28th, 2011, 10:00 AM
Hello,

I am new here, then i submit you my 2D work.
Portfolio: http://artoftyrack.carbonmade.com/


http://idata.over-blog.com/4/72/17/22/NET/Elfe-falaise.jpg

http://idata.over-blog.com/4/72/17/22/NET/Orc-falaise.jpg

http://idata.over-blog.com/4/72/17/22/NET/Hopping-Vampire_Colo.jpg


Thank you, and i am open to all critics.

Uziel
January 14th, 2012, 12:14 PM
Use more color variation in your work and it'll be more vivid.
Play with warm and cool colors.
You used it once in the vampire piece on the blue robe with warmer shadow in the folds.

For example the skintone on the elf is only ochre - no reds, no green color,...
same goes for the rocks, the grass,...

Hoang Nam Viet
January 30th, 2012, 09:08 PM
Seem your lineart is really really good, but you still not control the color.
I think, more contrast, more value for color is needed. And play more on details, the Org will be so dramatic, I think. :)