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Rissa G
August 27th, 2011, 12:25 PM
Hello everyone! If you have time, please feel free to galavant around my portfolio. I would LOVE to hear some critiques, even though regular feedback is good too. My portfolio can be found down below:

http://risgarner.daportfolio.com

knut-
August 27th, 2011, 12:36 PM
Nice work you got there.
You got a charming style as for the maquettes really, but something about the simplicity of the synthesis takes me off... I like the simple design, like the last one with the armor, but i think i want more detail on some parts of his armor maybe or a base for the snake female monster.
As for your sketches, try to be more dynamic with your colors and angles.
I mean, don;t use so clean colors, make variations of the same color and put them in.
Also, try to have sharper and cleaner edges, you will see that this will rise your sketches to another level!
That's for now, you really got potential so study and keep doing your thing!
Cheers!