View Full Version : Concept Portfolio. Light & Comp. Critique Appreciated!
May 3rd, 2010, 03:25 PM
Hi guys! I've recently taken up digital painting, so I'm still kinda new here. These are a few of the more finished pieces I've managed to pull out.
I think I've got the technique down now, so critique on lighting and composition would be greatly appreciated. If you find something else wrong though, please get all up in my grills about it. Thanks!
May 3rd, 2010, 06:38 PM
Yeah really like them. I would say for the one with the targets in the sky. you could perhaps intergrate them a little more. It would look more believable if there was some type of fogging going on like when you look at stars they tend to flicker. Other than that I'd say you just need to practice and you'l imporve as you learn new tricks ( but I suppose thats common knowledge).
Anyways, good work :)
May 3rd, 2010, 09:41 PM
These are great! I like the lightbulb, particularly because I can see a little frog man with creeping, tungsten hands...
May 3rd, 2010, 10:15 PM
Chimpulous: Thanks for the advice! Probably won't go back to it, 'cause I'm lazy, but I'll definitely keep unity between elements and layers in mind for future pieces.
FinniganDusk: I will never unsee that.