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hhughson
April 29th, 2010, 02:47 AM
Hi, I was hoping I could get some feedback on a concept piece I did a while ago for a school project. I'm hoping to find a few areas that I should focus on to improve my drawing and concept skills.

http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/9651/heatherhughsonconceptlo.jpg

It's based of the description of Bathilda Bagshot's house in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows

Eguevarra
April 30th, 2010, 01:14 AM
looks pretty cool, since it's dirty and old, you could add rips, tears and dents in everything (books, tables, couches etc)

charlesicay
April 30th, 2010, 02:14 AM
Heather,

I really really love this! I love how you colored it with markers. My suggestion would be, maybe putting something in the foreground. Break the picture plane. Using some elements to get us to feel that we are in the room. But other than that this is awesome!

Keep it up!

hhughson
May 5th, 2010, 06:35 PM
Thanks those are some really good ideas, I think I'll rework it a bit when I get a chance!