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Justice Von Brandt
July 8th, 2009, 06:38 PM
My idea is bringing life in general into the world
Crits/Feedback wanted :D

FINAL? need feedback!


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JLPastecchi
July 8th, 2009, 06:54 PM
this is beautiful, id like to see how its going to turn out

pearlyking
July 8th, 2009, 06:59 PM
Lovely drawing, I think I'd need to see a bit more rendering before volunteering a crit.

Justice Von Brandt
July 8th, 2009, 08:05 PM
Thanks :D

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riotorange
July 8th, 2009, 08:30 PM
Nice style, i agree with pearlyking i'll have to wait till more work is done.

comixnut
July 8th, 2009, 09:23 PM
i think this has a lot of potential, please keep going with it!

Justice Von Brandt
July 8th, 2009, 11:05 PM
Thanks everyone
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Justice Von Brandt
July 9th, 2009, 01:14 AM
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Artboy
July 9th, 2009, 01:27 AM
This is nice Justice. I like the feel of this, kind of reminds me of the old turn of the century artists (which I love).

Justice Von Brandt
July 9th, 2009, 02:27 AM
Thanks :D
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The man with no name
July 9th, 2009, 02:30 AM
wow, it's coming along really nicely :teeth:

Justice Von Brandt
July 9th, 2009, 02:55 AM
Thanks :D

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Justice Von Brandt
July 9th, 2009, 03:52 AM
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Justice Von Brandt
July 9th, 2009, 04:46 AM
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Justice Von Brandt
July 9th, 2009, 05:23 AM
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Justice Von Brandt
July 9th, 2009, 06:47 AM
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Nickillus
July 9th, 2009, 06:54 AM
This is going to be a vibrant and eye catching take on 'Newborn', in a really individual way Justice. Great to see. I'm a bit nervous that big fish mouth thing behind the girl is about to eat her though. Or is natural selection part of your underlying message?

And wow - just noticed how fast you are going. Do you wear a crash helmet?

Justice Von Brandt
July 9th, 2009, 03:28 PM
Thanks, I didn't intend that ;p
And yeah I worked non stop on the painting last night - so exhausting

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Justice Von Brandt
July 9th, 2009, 03:48 PM
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Justice Von Brandt
July 9th, 2009, 03:52 PM
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bladesofpassion
July 9th, 2009, 04:02 PM
Hi, it is very much a colorful piece but I think it lacks a bit of depth. It is a very intriguing collage of images but the message is a bit garbled. Are the animals attracted to the wood nymph? I feel as though the jaguar should almost poof into the scene by some mystic source much as the ape in the tree did. Excellent color palette by the way! I love the line work too.

Justice Von Brandt
July 9th, 2009, 05:24 PM
Thanks
My idea was just to show mother nature and the plant/animal life that she is part of

sluggert
July 9th, 2009, 10:15 PM
i really like this
the inking and colors are amazing

Justice Von Brandt
July 10th, 2009, 12:13 AM
Thanks ;D

ROBOT_TANK
July 10th, 2009, 01:51 AM
your image looks a little flat, I think you can push the values more to create more depth. It seems a bit rushed, maybe it's just your style, not sure...I do like the line work.

Dorkthrone
July 10th, 2009, 04:13 AM
The draftsmanship is impeccable, but, to a certain extent, I have to agree with ROBOT_TANK. I would push the values a little more to make it seem less flat.

Justice Von Brandt
July 10th, 2009, 05:34 PM
Thanks for the feedback
I pushed the values

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Dorkthrone
July 10th, 2009, 05:46 PM
The values are looking better already.

Justice Von Brandt
July 11th, 2009, 04:21 AM
Thanks
I think I might calll it done

sluggert
July 11th, 2009, 05:48 PM
looks much better now

Justice Von Brandt
July 12th, 2009, 03:35 PM
thanks :D

miycko
July 13th, 2009, 05:14 AM
Very artistic, a bit wierd but very artistic.

Justice Von Brandt
July 16th, 2009, 06:26 AM
thanks :D