Animated Short

[Solbester]

This is an animated short i worked and i would like to know what everyone's opinion is... Thank You
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[DanielBodinof]

this feels like a student piece. it has some funny elements, but it's not really funny enough if you know what i mean. don't take it harshly because its really really hard to animate something funny. lord knows i animated plenty of shorts that didn't get the laughs i wanted so spend some time learning about comedic timing. it also needs to move a long a bit faster. you could cut out a lot or speed up the writing in general. also i can tell some of the animators are "afraid" to really have the character walk, run, and shift weight. theres a lot of the "lots of hand and head gesturing while seeming to have tree roots on their feet" kinda stuff. keep animating!

[Solbester]

Yea i totally agree with what you said. This was a project i did when i was in school in order to graduate. I only had 3 months to animate it while having 5 other classes so that could explain some of the animation. I agree with what you said about the jokes im going to look a bit more into that.... Thanks alot again for your reply and i will continue to animate!!