Two animations!!!

[Kilmyneo]

Hello, i invite you all to see my 2d animation called ¨The Little Universe Of The Loops¨ and drop some positive comment, Regards.

Links:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YgN7HFWUMes

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C419Tv-7EQk

[rattus]

hahahaha :D crazy...
really cool idea with the loops around the world.
i enjoyd "pirats" more than "what a boring game",
i dont have much to crit really as this style isnt my favourite in the world of animation but you did a great job i think!
the piratyell and arms in the air are hysterical.
also the magnifyglass with the pirats inside at the start there are a great kinda logo.
you didnt include ¨Tato, Tolo and there friends¨ inside the magnifyglass
in the "boring game" but i think you should go with that consistently.

there are probably a couple of small things i could put my finger on in both
animations if i brake it down, but the overall feel of this are more important.
You succeed in giving "real life" to this and varm personality.
already you establish a universe i belive in. this on tv? i wouldnt be surprised.

[Kilmyneo]

hello Ratus, thanks for comming by and see it.
well what can i say to your comments, thanks so much for your apreciation.
As you said, i didn´t include Tato tolo and there friends inside the magnifyglass on ¨What a boring game ¨ because i made a new intro scene there i plan to include.
Again thanks for see it and do a positive critique, i invite you if you want, to share the animation ;):)

[egerie]

That’s a lot of SFX there… And lenseflares… I almost didn't click your second link but it's lovely. Whereas a boring game timming isn't as fun as Pirates. I absolutely love the crab in that one!

HAAAYYYRGH!!! :D

[batcustard]

those sound effects have got to go. I watched them once with and once without, I couldn't even concentrate long enough to figure out what was going on the first time, muted it was really nice. The animation is super good and with such an abstract idea I think you want to distract the audience as little as is possible.

[Kilmyneo]

Thanks for comment Batcustard i will keep on mind, im afraid that the sound gives a funny detail to the character, as Egerie says the AARGHHH pirates is really funny and one of my favorite parts and also bring to live this 2d animated characters.
Maybe could be the music behind the Sound Fx that is a bit enoing, constantly repeating, but hey i dont know :) thats why i put my animation in here to see how people see this animations and fix details that maybe im missing :) please keep doing comment and positive critiques will be very welcome.
thanks again for watch it.