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silverslash
November 15th, 2003, 07:25 PM
hi im new to the boards and was hoping for some critique on this piece , thx in advance :D
http://www.portfolios.com/zoom.html?User_number=silverslash&imagecount=1
silverslash
November 15th, 2003, 07:32 PM
Yay its up! ,miracles can happen. now any comments?
silverslash
November 17th, 2003, 02:46 PM
no comments? :(
nikia
November 17th, 2003, 02:48 PM
no picture.
bgermain
November 17th, 2003, 02:50 PM
I can't get the image to load at the moment.
Don't worry about not getting a speedy response from people. Sometimes it can take a day or two, especially if you're new to the board. It's nothing personal so don't fret.
:)
silverslash
November 17th, 2003, 02:55 PM
hmm there u go that link should work .
Ian Mack
November 17th, 2003, 03:09 PM
A good start....I would keep the colouring style more uniform tho.
silverslash
November 18th, 2003, 10:38 AM
more uniform? how? im open to suggestions.
ZeroWave
November 18th, 2003, 11:02 AM
Just my opinion...but the figure looks really pasted into the background..the flowers are nice, but the grids are distracting..also the wings don't seem to be apart of the figure..they look like they are more apart of the background..if It was my piece, I would go back and focus more on the figure...
DaemonMagus
November 18th, 2003, 12:42 PM
Because of the grid on top of the wings, the wings don't look like they are attached to the person. And the person's head is sorta distracting because, at least to me, it looks out of proportion.
bgermain
November 18th, 2003, 05:12 PM
Yeah, I would have to agree that there's nothing visually connecting the character to the environment (or the wings). Maybe you could apply some of the background "digital" styling to the parts of the girl?
silverslash
November 18th, 2003, 06:13 PM
thats not a bad idea bgermain, i think ill try that.
daemon, good suggestion i think ill play around with the grid and try to put it behind the wings.
Thanks for all the input guys. kkep it coming :bash: