binoched
September 30th, 2008, 02:53 AM
Looking for feedback. Thanks for viewing. Comments and crits are welcome
Terekjet
September 30th, 2008, 02:56 AM
i especially like the pose, maybe some more exagerated perspective could help, but great anyways.
I like the armor design overall, but maybe the helmet doesnt fits with the sthetic that u put on his other armor pieces; separatelly, they work perfect aswell. very interesting pic!
Dahami
September 30th, 2008, 03:25 AM
I like it! But the legs don't look quite finished. A little more touching up around the edges and smoothing out of the skin would help them. The thigh that's coming toward us looks almost like a log, and should maybe look thicker in the upper part, although I can also see how that might be due to the perspective. The female form is all about curves, and you certainly show that with the hip, but somehow the legs don't look quite curvy enough. The armor is great, and I think the helmet does go well with the rest of the armor. It's not very practical, of course, but this is obviously a sci-fi universe, and maybe that's the way the Emperor wants her to dress. Her arms, neck and waist maybe look just a little bit too thin, and her abdomen could use a little more rendering, rather than simple lines showing the definition. The fingers on her right hand where she is holding the staff/weapon could also use a little more rendering. The face is beautiful, and I like the overall composition of the image. She is quite a babe, and a tough one too, from the looks of it.