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December 10th, 2007, 04:54 PM
This picture was made for russian card game "Berserk". May be it will be accept and relized 8)
December 10th, 2007, 05:11 PM
I cannot see this not being accepted. No way. This shit is bananas. I have nothing constructive to add other than Yeeeeaaaaaah boyeeeeee
December 10th, 2007, 05:23 PM
Hey man, relly like your painting! Very dramatic!
2 Things to crit from my side, though!
Maybe you could make the axe a bit sharper? Where the Blade meets the red Cape it seems a bit blured, I' imagine it to be a bit sharper :)
And maybe you couldchange the title, I'm not sure but is there a word like "Reborned"? shouldn't it just be "Reborn"? But I'm not sure, since I'm not a native english speaker as well!
Like to see more of your work though!
Keep smiling :)
December 10th, 2007, 06:04 PM
Maybe it's just me, but i think that the left leg is a bit off, dont know how to say it properly. Anyway i like it.
December 10th, 2007, 06:34 PM
This shit is bananas. Yeeeeaaaaaah boyeeeeee
Lovely pic. Lots of character. There might be a little too much space on the left hand side though.
December 10th, 2007, 07:21 PM
I like the space on his left, it shows a strong area of lookspace and landscape. My one crit is that there is no hint of his right arm so for all I know it's lobbed off. In some instances I don't even notice it with peoples works but this time it bothers me.
December 10th, 2007, 08:32 PM
No Ya dumayu shto dospehi no ego ruke dovolno skushniye po srovneniyu s evo dospehami na tele.
December 10th, 2007, 09:04 PM
Please take my crit with a grain of salt because you have a very nice peice here. You obviously know what your doing. I was wondering about under his right foot (our left) it seems a bit muddy. With the skylight being blue and the back light such a brilliant red would it take on more of the sky color?
December 10th, 2007, 09:26 PM
nice work here
December 10th, 2007, 10:09 PM
I'm loving your style. When are you gonna update your sketchbook, again? :P
I have one critique, though. It's 'reborn'. :P
December 10th, 2007, 11:53 PM
THats really sick. I like the pose along with the color pallatte. Nice comp.
December 11th, 2007, 12:07 AM
Great stuff man...Nothing bad to say... keep posting!
December 11th, 2007, 12:15 AM
Sharper blade! i agree,
Reborn eh, juxtopossed life and death into this piece, the color of red can mean life,blood,
with the background, a sunrise? a renewal of a new day begins,ah.
December 11th, 2007, 02:42 AM
Very brutal, this what comes first and beautiful in second.
(in a zombie voice) more, moooore ......
December 11th, 2007, 03:22 AM
cool design! im having this "Warhammer goes Spawn" feeling over it, and thats a good thing, cause i love spawn and warhammer lol.
love the runes and other engravings u got there, awezome design
December 11th, 2007, 03:24 AM
Well done, I would also like to see a little bit of his right arm if I have to crit something, but I think it´s amazing...
December 11th, 2007, 03:51 AM
I think it's a really nice piece. I think you do a great job emphasizing the character by framing his head with the light on the clouds. The only thing i would add to maybe pump up the image is to bring some subtle cool blue/green lights on the armor, especially the chest piece. I think it would help to define the dimensionality of it and amp up the fantastic nature of the card.
December 11th, 2007, 04:30 AM
Wohoho.~ Cool stuff.~! Love the detail on the armour.